The feed back I was given where the design is too primitive and no architectural space can be seen.
The design above was inspired by the rough sketch below using the word craftmenship.
Finally Jacky advised me to investigate into works of Peter Eisenman for inspiration and by doing so and I found the image below very intriguing. Thus most of the architecture for my final building is heavily inspired by Eisenman.
Architect: Peter Eisenman
Building: City of Culture of Galicia
Built: 1993
Located in Spain, the building is built to as The Museum of Galician HIstory and the New Technologies center; the Music Theater and Central Services building; and the Galician Library and Periodicals Archive.
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